Funny you should mention that. I had a couple of paragraphs explaining they still had to move the beds and some supplies up to the safe room and the wolves hadn’t found them yet until they showed up that night.
I ditched the paragraphs because I didn’t like all the narrative voice explanation. Oh well, c’est la vie. Thank your for the feedback and reading my story.
That wasn't very wise of them to not sleep in the safe room all the time. Other than that, loved the intensity of the action.
Funny you should mention that. I had a couple of paragraphs explaining they still had to move the beds and some supplies up to the safe room and the wolves hadn’t found them yet until they showed up that night.
I ditched the paragraphs because I didn’t like all the narrative voice explanation. Oh well, c’est la vie. Thank your for the feedback and reading my story.
A one-sentence "just trust me on this" type of explanation would probably gotten me off your back.
Thank you for the restacks Dave!