I loved it. I was so into it there at the end I didn't realize it was almost over and I had that moment where I scrolled up and down looking for the rest of it before I broke out of the trance. lol
Catching that fastball? Made my hand hurt reading it. Even Bullseye was like, "What the fuck man?"
Great job. I seriously can't wait to see what happens next.
I feel like I’ve passed a big test if Bullseye’s biggest fan gives my Bullseye story a thumbs up. Thank you very much for passing on the positive feedback. The next story’s fight is pretty nasty. I had to get stitches after writing it.
Dam, right to the action. Freaking loved it. Again the details made sense and I really love that Bullseye is so good - close to perfect - but adjusts to dial in difficult shots. That is a nice touche and gives it the realism I appreciate. I was really locked in on this story! Excellent
Thanks for the great feedback. I always appreciate it. I think I might have gone a little over board with the body count but I wanted to make the point that Bullseye and the Kingpin were different kinds of villains compared to the Owl or Stiltman and there was a good reason why DD wanted to keep them out of Hell’s Kitchen. Next weeks fight is so nasty I needed stitches after writing it!
Hahaa!! Well I think it was spot on. Also reminds me of a though ; that DD might be the best or one of, and most productive crime fighters - he gets notifications others can't get. That's gold if your trying to get to the trouble spots. Batman, captain, etc could be right close to something and miss it, if it weren't scripted in...
That’s similar to what I was thinking of including in some later (way later) stories. I think DD would be a much better detective than Batman. If he walked into a crime scene he could figure out more in a few seconds than a team of forensics experts could.
I loved it. I was so into it there at the end I didn't realize it was almost over and I had that moment where I scrolled up and down looking for the rest of it before I broke out of the trance. lol
Catching that fastball? Made my hand hurt reading it. Even Bullseye was like, "What the fuck man?"
Great job. I seriously can't wait to see what happens next.
I feel like I’ve passed a big test if Bullseye’s biggest fan gives my Bullseye story a thumbs up. Thank you very much for passing on the positive feedback. The next story’s fight is pretty nasty. I had to get stitches after writing it.
Ha. I bet. Bullseye demands nothing less.
I know DD is going to beat his ass, I mean the maniac was aiming for the baby next.
Still, hope Bullseye gets some good licks in. lol
Again, great job.
I’m guessing Bullseye gets in about 3 pints worth of licks but he gets a few organs rearranged in return.
Dam, right to the action. Freaking loved it. Again the details made sense and I really love that Bullseye is so good - close to perfect - but adjusts to dial in difficult shots. That is a nice touche and gives it the realism I appreciate. I was really locked in on this story! Excellent
Thanks for the great feedback. I always appreciate it. I think I might have gone a little over board with the body count but I wanted to make the point that Bullseye and the Kingpin were different kinds of villains compared to the Owl or Stiltman and there was a good reason why DD wanted to keep them out of Hell’s Kitchen. Next weeks fight is so nasty I needed stitches after writing it!
Hahaa!! Well I think it was spot on. Also reminds me of a though ; that DD might be the best or one of, and most productive crime fighters - he gets notifications others can't get. That's gold if your trying to get to the trouble spots. Batman, captain, etc could be right close to something and miss it, if it weren't scripted in...
That’s similar to what I was thinking of including in some later (way later) stories. I think DD would be a much better detective than Batman. If he walked into a crime scene he could figure out more in a few seconds than a team of forensics experts could.
That's a lot of death for one episode :O
Yeah, I’m trying to establish Bullseye as death on two legs and this baseball slaughter is a foundation for the final four stories.